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DSCF8480Capture Date: Oct 28, 2018 10:57 AM•Views: 17No comments yet. CarlaAtFanime Nov 29, 2018 11:03 AM
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I think you wanted the focus of this picture to be the pumpkin. However, there is far too much other space. My eye keeps going to that big expanse of the blue wall. Maybe try cropping about half of the wall. Play with cropping. |
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I arrived at the Crystal Bay Farm in Watsonville, Ca. when a couple ladies put the finishing touches on their decorative homage to the Great Pumpkin.
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No comments yet. CarlaAtFanime Nov 29, 2018 11:06 AM
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Nice. One suggestion would be to crop out the shadow on the left side. You then might have to crop some from the right for balance. |
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HallowedCapture Date: Jun 1, 2017 12:00 AM•Views: 27No comments yet. CarlaAtFanime Nov 29, 2018 11:07 AM
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Nice. Try cropping out that dark rectangle on the top. It is distracting. |
No comments yet. CarlaAtFanime Nov 29, 2018 11:11 AM
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Try cropping way down. No need for sky at all. Cut most of the road out, too.Then the eye will go to the pumpkin, your subject. |
No comments yet. CarlaAtFanime Nov 29, 2018 11:14 AM
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That bright area is so very over exposed hat it detracts from the center pumpkin. Nothing much you can do about it now. Keep it in mind for next time. |
No comments yet. CarlaAtFanime Nov 29, 2018 11:17 AM
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Make more symmetrical by cropping off some of top, left, and bottom to match right side. Otherwise, very good. |
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One of four boxes to choose from at Safeway.
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No comments yet. GloriaKeller Nov 29, 2018 03:34 PM
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Thanks. Very helpful, Carla! |
No comments yet. BobStine Nov 29, 2018 08:32 PM
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GloriaKeller, LOL. That actually describes her perfectly. She rode this bike from Canada to Mexico all alone! |
No comments yet. BobStine Nov 29, 2018 02:47 PM
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Thanks for the comments and suggestion. |
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No comments yet. BobStine Nov 29, 2018 02:50 PM
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CarlaAtFanime, I'm chuckling about your cropping comments because I typically crop my images tightly. For this assignment, I was given specific format criteria and the need to include the area for context. Thanks for your comments. |
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